The first part of my Manga script
(The following is a short sample of my manga script, im vary new at this and if you have suggestions and critcisem please share them with me, but please make it constructive)
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Toshi Kamiyuki - Issue 0 - Prologue of Hatred, Part one - Cory Church
PAGE ONE(three panels):
Panel One:
A large rectangular panel spanning the with of the page showing the moon slightly obstructed by a patch of clouds overlooking a rundown futuristic town on the edge of a vast gray ashy wasteland.
TOSHI (CAPTION): I live in a shity world filled with nothing but greed and no mercy.
Panel Two:
A panel below roughly the same size portraying the back of a boy looking down upon the small town from a high mountain. His hands are in his jean pockets. We cant see his face.
SFX: Light wind.
TOSHI (CAPTION): Love and kindness, Justice and purity. Its not as simple as you wish it would be.
Panel Three:
A square panel that takes up one side of the page below that and they slightly dissolve into on another. We now see Toshi‘s face. He has black hair, is thin and a loose fitting hoddie flailing in the wind. He looks down lost in his own thoughts.
CAPTION: Toshi Kamiyuki, age 10.
TOSHI (CAPTION): I was only ten years old when I learned that.
SPLASH PAGE
A title page portraying Toshi on his knees, screaming to the sky. Covered in blood and bruises and hugging a huge sword. With the chapter caption under it: Toshi Kamiyuki: Prologue of hatred, Part One.
PAGE THREE (five panels):
Panel One:
A square panel. A streetlight view of an intersection in town. A few cars and people walk about. But the streets are a mess.
TOSHI (CAPTION): I used to live in a small neglected Town in the outlands, known as Lyunt. It was a real shit hole.
Panel Two:
A panel below that one, same size, shows the streets. They look bleak and the citizens walk around with clothing that would suggest gang affiliation and crime.
TOSHI (CAPTION): It wasn’t a part of the five major cities that made up the world. It was an isolated area, A place that people visited if they were kicked out of a city, or was just passing through to go to a city
Panel Three:
A long panel next to the first two. A high view of an alleyway populated with the homeless.
TOSHI (CAPTION): If someone here wasn’t a gang member or some other type of fool, then they were either hungry or homeless.
Panel Four:
A rectangular panel below the others. Toshi walks down the side walk, hands still in his pockets.
TOSHI (CAPTION): My town was a neglected dump, Forgotten and ignored by the major civilizations.
Panel Five:
The last panel is a fairly large one that. Takes up the rest of the page. From an angle looking up form the street, Toshi’s hair flails in the wind. And Toshi’s final caption.
TOSHI (CAPTION): The outside world didn’t give a shit about us. We were alone.
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(Thats the end of the sample, I’ve started writing a manga in script format and I was thinking about making it a web comic or do a little self publishing.
Anyways I was hoping a person who considers themselves a highly skilled mangaka, could lend there art to my project. I need someone who writes in a kind of dark style, like Death Note and Elfin Lied but can also draw the comical stuff (Funny anime faces, character reactions etc.)
The manga is in the most part a dark and bloody action thriller. Set in a sci-fi/fantasy cyberpunk world but there are going to be some sexual related comedy about it. Featuring lesbians, friendship and the normal aspects of a teenage drama. I would post the full synopsis but I don’t want this post to be to long. So if your interested or want to know more, leave me a message)
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Toshi Kamiyuki - Issue 0 - Prologue of Hatred, Part one - Cory Church
PAGE ONE(three panels):
Panel One:
A large rectangular panel spanning the with of the page showing the moon slightly obstructed by a patch of clouds overlooking a rundown futuristic town on the edge of a vast gray ashy wasteland.
TOSHI (CAPTION): I live in a shity world filled with nothing but greed and no mercy.
Panel Two:
A panel below roughly the same size portraying the back of a boy looking down upon the small town from a high mountain. His hands are in his jean pockets. We cant see his face.
SFX: Light wind.
TOSHI (CAPTION): Love and kindness, Justice and purity. Its not as simple as you wish it would be.
Panel Three:
A square panel that takes up one side of the page below that and they slightly dissolve into on another. We now see Toshi‘s face. He has black hair, is thin and a loose fitting hoddie flailing in the wind. He looks down lost in his own thoughts.
CAPTION: Toshi Kamiyuki, age 10.
TOSHI (CAPTION): I was only ten years old when I learned that.
SPLASH PAGE
A title page portraying Toshi on his knees, screaming to the sky. Covered in blood and bruises and hugging a huge sword. With the chapter caption under it: Toshi Kamiyuki: Prologue of hatred, Part One.
PAGE THREE (five panels):
Panel One:
A square panel. A streetlight view of an intersection in town. A few cars and people walk about. But the streets are a mess.
TOSHI (CAPTION): I used to live in a small neglected Town in the outlands, known as Lyunt. It was a real shit hole.
Panel Two:
A panel below that one, same size, shows the streets. They look bleak and the citizens walk around with clothing that would suggest gang affiliation and crime.
TOSHI (CAPTION): It wasn’t a part of the five major cities that made up the world. It was an isolated area, A place that people visited if they were kicked out of a city, or was just passing through to go to a city
Panel Three:
A long panel next to the first two. A high view of an alleyway populated with the homeless.
TOSHI (CAPTION): If someone here wasn’t a gang member or some other type of fool, then they were either hungry or homeless.
Panel Four:
A rectangular panel below the others. Toshi walks down the side walk, hands still in his pockets.
TOSHI (CAPTION): My town was a neglected dump, Forgotten and ignored by the major civilizations.
Panel Five:
The last panel is a fairly large one that. Takes up the rest of the page. From an angle looking up form the street, Toshi’s hair flails in the wind. And Toshi’s final caption.
TOSHI (CAPTION): The outside world didn’t give a shit about us. We were alone.
///////////////////////////////////////////
(Thats the end of the sample, I’ve started writing a manga in script format and I was thinking about making it a web comic or do a little self publishing.
Anyways I was hoping a person who considers themselves a highly skilled mangaka, could lend there art to my project. I need someone who writes in a kind of dark style, like Death Note and Elfin Lied but can also draw the comical stuff (Funny anime faces, character reactions etc.)
The manga is in the most part a dark and bloody action thriller. Set in a sci-fi/fantasy cyberpunk world but there are going to be some sexual related comedy about it. Featuring lesbians, friendship and the normal aspects of a teenage drama. I would post the full synopsis but I don’t want this post to be to long. So if your interested or want to know more, leave me a message)
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